Research & Planning - How To Improve

I have recently received my moderator feedback, and was quite pleased with the result. :D

Improvements on....

Film Poster

• Change the Tag Lines font

Film Trailer

• Include an Establishing Shot at the beginning

• Shorten some clips

• Change some of the clips screening e.g black & white for the introduction/past moments

• Edit the sound bridge

• Add more dramatic music using Garageband

These are my targets for now, I will post some ideal fonts to my tagline, and ask some friends for their opinion. 

Also I will be working with my group and we will try to compose a fitting song to play throughout the trailer. Also film an establishing shot for the beginning of the trailer.